Drama advertisements 9Hh

My favorite ad is Spray and Walk away, this is because I like the way slang it has to it and how they then used that in the name.

The way the presented this ad make people want to buy it, I know that if I actually had a use for it I would probably have brought it.

A few ways for them to make the ad better as if they done it on a more sunny day so that the lighting would have been much better and you would have been able to see the product easier.

Spray and walk away

1. Should you lie about your product- No you should be completely truthful about what you are selling, If it could harm animals or humans whether it is intentional or not you should be 100% truthful
2. should you falsely advertise your product- Again be 100% honest with your costumer else you are never gonna make money or even profit.
3. Should you advertise fatty foods- Well companies must do whatever it takes for people to buy their product. But I personally don't think We need to be saying that this is so healthy when you're just gaining more fat!

Jaleel Drama 2018 9Hh

My Name is Jaleel Arataura-Collins, I play netball for Hornby netball club in the o team and I play C, WA, WD, I like to Sleep, Eat, Cook. I enjoy Talking/Hanging out with my friends, As Well as doing my makeup. I have one brother and two sisters I am a cook island, Scottish, Maori. I cook dinner for my family at least 5 nights a week, I really dislike doing the dishes also I dislike math

 Here is a link to my google silde to know more about me.Jaleels talk

to make my speech better I would make eye contact with my audience.
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